The article states that employees in the United States typically prefer to work five days a week for eight hours per day but many employees want to work only four days week even they like to accept less pay than the normal pay. Also, the statement provides three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that this change will not work and it will create a problem economically and in the life of employees and he refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that this benefit will increase company profit because employees will feel more rested and alert, for this error will decrease and company can hire more employees. But the professor refutes this point by saying that company has to pay more money for those additional employees because training and medical benefits are also necessary for those employees. He also states that even more employees means it needs more space and computer, so definitely company profit will reduce.
Second, the article posits that this change will reduce unemployment rate. However the professor says that this four days plan will enhance the unemployment rate. According to him, additional employment will enrich expectation to work same amount of work in overtime and therefore job will become unpleasant. That will be the cause of unemployment rate.
Third, the reading says that this four days plan will improve the quality of lives for individual employees because they will get free time to spend with their families or pursuing any private interest or doing any activities. But, the professor opposes this point by explaining that it is very risk, also it will reduce their quality of lives. We also learn that this plan will decrease the job ability and it will not help for their promotion because company prefers a manager who likes to works five days plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e refutes each of the authors reasons. First, the reading claims that this bene...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...mployees. He also states that even more employees means it needs more space and computer,...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s change will reduce unemployment rate. However the professor says that this four days ...
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Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'work'.
Suggestion: work
... company prefers a manager who likes to works five days plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01628664495 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35092064325 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508143322476 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8331012066 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373657144473 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13068586276 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135044840694 0.0662205650399 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247239979496 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166628990438 0.0443174109184 376% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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