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The reading claims that dams represent one of the most beneficial and effective forms of electricity creation today and provides three reasons of support. On the other hand, the professor states that more research and development are necessary and he refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article avers that dams positively impact the environment. However, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by stating that the environment does suffer. He says that during the construction of dams, the water will be diverted and this presents a problem to the migratory of fish. In addition, when the water returned, it will flow more slowly and as a result it will hurt the production of fish to lay their eggs. This challanges the facts in the passage.
Second, the passage asserts that the power generatd from a dam produces no harmful pollutants. In contrast, the professor counters this point by explaining that dams contribute to add pollutants. In fact, he discusses that when lakes flood around the land, the plants die and the dead plants rot over time so methane will be released. Besides, plants remove carbon dioxide, which is a global warming gas, so dams destroy the plants that remove this global warming gas.This appears a contradiction of the information made in the passage.
Third, the article posits that dams create no financial burden for the community. Conversely, the professor opposes this point by saying that the community does suffer. Actually, he states that dams creates enormous lakes which flood periodically and this is not cheap. Also, he explains that dams is unfeasible without government's aid which has to pay local tax dollars. This disputes the third point mentioned in the article.
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that dams is unfeasible
that dams are unfeasible
Sentence: This challanges the facts in the passage.
Error: challanges Suggestion: challenges
Sentence: Second, the passage asserts that the power generatd from a dam produces no harmful pollutants.
Error: generatd Suggestion: generate
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 12
No. of Words: 284 250
No. of Characters: 1404 1200
No. of Different Words: 159 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.969 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4