Internet Essay
Could you imagine the world without internet? Probably if you are teenager or a young adult, you will response that is impossible. Whereas, there can be no doubt that if you are an adult, you will say is feasible. For a simple reason that when the adults were young, the internet did not exist. The internet has had on enormous impact on the world, however, it has positive and negative consequences.
On the one hand, the internet has multiple advantages. First and foremost, The internet keeping in touch and communicated around the world. Furthermore, it helps young people to widen their knowledge and improve their grades as well as practicing foreign langueges and that is not all, the internet has changes the manner in which business activities are carried out.
On the other hand, the internet has a considerable disadvantages. The young people can be addicted to online gaming and produce a negative impact on their schoolwork or amount of exercise outside home. Apart from this, the internet has led to moral decay of the young generation such as violence on gaming or social network.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that the internet is essential to sociaty although it has some cons. However, you should know this negatives effects in view of regulate its use so that you will prevent an addiction and other negative consequences.
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| 2018-02-03 | tamarapinto | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disadvantage'?
Suggestion: disadvantage
...r hand, the internet has a considerable disadvantages. The young people can be addicted to on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, no doubt, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90829694323 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6860829596 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0114469935 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213977105192 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101502806482 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736351657145 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134703491885 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444372746388 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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