The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. Do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that printed textbooks will never disappear in the school learning process, despite that modern technology is offering the humanity more and more opportunities. Honestly, I do agree with this opinion and here I will state two reasons why I am convinced that it is true.
Indeed, traditional books make the students utilize their imagination and improve their creative thinking which is important for writing essays later in the future. During the process of reading textbooks, people develop their abilities to pay attention on details, learn synonymic words and improve the grammar knowledge. All these listed abilities facilitate our brain development which fosters the academic success and positively affects our use of everyday life skills, makes us more productive and effective in the studies. The Internet is not able to provide such opportunity to student as technology was created to serve as a tool to find the information fast, but not deep.
By the same token, reading a physical book develops the mental skills of students and trains them to make decisions. It enhances their ability to search for the needed information by themselves and learn how to solve problems apart from the outside help. These skills are crucial for the growing generation as it will train them to act on their own and apply the critical thinking abilities. The Internet can hardly ever offer this experience since it fulfills the user’s needs by giving an immediate answer and has little effect on our brain development.
Nonetheless, the fast development of the technologies cannot be overestimated and it is easier for the students to search any information in the Internet than it encyclopedia. More and more applications and programs are appearing nowadays: Wikipedia enables us to search any fact or story that we are craving to find. As for the videos, Youtube is a modern tool to watch a big range of lections of every area or theme. It definitely implements getting the answers on our questions fast, but does not train any of our skills.
To sum up, I would like to say that the Internet will never remove the use of traditional textbook in the educational process. Printed books’ need in the educational system is crucial and the Internet will never offer the mankind the options that the book approach will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, nonetheless, so, apart from, as for, it is true, to sum up, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 385.0 270.72406181 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76510067642 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561038961039 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1066606875 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.6875 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183514767651 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586670465613 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729345481215 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116548927801 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101476970958 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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