Both the reading and listening discuss how the edmotosaurs survived the harsh arctic winter in the North slope. The author believes that edmotosaurs migrate south every winter to warmer zones in order to thrive and he provides three reasons for support. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that none of these theories are convincing.
To begin with, the author suggests that edmotosaurs migrate to temperate areas to get plants to feed on since they were herbivorous. The lecturer challenges this specific argument by asserting that edmotosaurs do not have to migrate to get food, because 100 millions years ago the North slope was warmer than nowadays and the sun shone 24 hours daily in the summer. Consequently, the growing vegetation in summer was good enough to feed the edmotosaurs and they can eat the dead vegetation during winter .
Secondly, the writer argues that edmotosaurs' skeletons that were found in the same area supported that they lived in herds, which edmotosaurs helped with the migration coordination. The lecturer, however, rebuts this point by mentioning that living in herds could be for other purposes like extra protection from their predators. For instance, Rosvilt elk, in the western United States, live in herds and do not migrate. Based on that, the migration hypothesis is not correct.
Finally, the author posits that edmotosaurs had the physical abilities to travel for long distances, and they were swift animals that can run with very high speed up to Km Per hour, which supports that they migrate using the locomotive power every winter to warmer zone. In contrast, the lecturer cast doubt on this claim by stating that even if the adults were physically able to migrate far distances, the young edmotosaurs can not do that because of their limited physical ability . Thus, the herd can not migrate without the juveniles since they were not able to survive the harsh conditions in the North Pole.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ince they were herbivorous. The lecturer challenges this specific argument by ass...
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...this specific argument by asserting that edmotosaurs do not have to migrate to ge...
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... they can eat the dead vegetation during winter . Secondly, the writer argues...
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...r . Secondly, the writer argues that edmotosaurs skeletons that were found in...
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...herds and do not migrate. Based on that, the migration hypothesis is not correct....
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...ally, the author posits that edmotosaurs had the physical abilities to travel f...
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... edmotosaurs had the physical abilities to travel for long distances, and they ...
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...otosaurs had the physical abilities to travel for long distances, and they were...
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...very winter to warmer zone. In contrast, the lecturer cast doubt on this claim by...
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...bt on this claim by stating that even if the adults were physically able to migra...
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...ate far distances, the young edmotosaurs can not do that because of their limited...
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...ecause of their limited physical ability . Thus, the herd can not migrate without...
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...imited physical ability . Thus, the herd can not migrate without the juveniles si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15290519878 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60209000711 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2073615476 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712041678419 0.272083759551 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267200922622 0.0996497079465 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408149744076 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047062274688 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259913092604 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ince they were herbivorous. The lecturer challenges this specific argument by ass...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this specific argument by asserting that edmotosaurs do not have to migrate to ge...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they can eat the dead vegetation during winter . Secondly, the writer argues...
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...n eat the dead vegetation during winter . Secondly, the writer argues that e...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...r . Secondly, the writer argues that edmotosaurs skeletons that were found in...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...herds and do not migrate. Based on that, the migration hypothesis is not correct....
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...ally, the author posits that edmotosaurs had the physical abilities to travel f...
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... edmotosaurs had the physical abilities to travel for long distances, and they ...
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...otosaurs had the physical abilities to travel for long distances, and they were...
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...very winter to warmer zone. In contrast, the lecturer cast doubt on this claim by...
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Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...bt on this claim by stating that even if the adults were physically able to migra...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ate far distances, the young edmotosaurs can not do that because of their limited...
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...ecause of their limited physical ability . Thus, the herd can not migrate without...
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Line 7, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...imited physical ability . Thus, the herd can not migrate without the juveniles si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15290519878 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60209000711 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2073615476 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712041678419 0.272083759551 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267200922622 0.0996497079465 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408149744076 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047062274688 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259913092604 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.