LASER EYE SURGERY
The reading and the lecture both discuss laser eye surgery. The reading suggests that there are a number of problems with laser surgery that may make for people who do this surgery for the eyes. However, the lecture disagrees, saying that these problems are not common in these days.
The cost of this surgery is one of those problems. According to the reading, this process require several special instruments which are expensive and also doctors’ charge is very much, thus the cost of surgery will be increased relating to these problems. The professor, on the other hand, refutes that because of technology developments and more competition among doctors the price has decreased for last years, then almost people all can do surgery easily.
In addition, post-operative problems have casted doubt in the lecture and the reading. The reading says that there are some reports about cornea detaching and much recovery time after the surgery. In contrast, the speaker points out that a few known cases have reported for cornea detaching and also healing fully will not take much time and it only needs only about 2 or 3 days.
Finally, how long will last the laser surgery has discussed in the reading and the lecture. The reading states that most of the people have to come back to the doctor only after four or five years later. However, the professor states that there are a lot of evidences which show the laser eye surgery takes not only 5 years but also about twenty years after the surgery process, then this problem is not true as well.
In summary, against the reading statements and according to the lecture, laser eye surgery will become even more popular in a few next years
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, may, so, then, thus, well, in addition, in contrast, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85172413793 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3424963056 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4753350626 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331337141962 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129167753705 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128556240922 0.0662205650399 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210993365055 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12919230481 0.0443174109184 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.