According the reading passage burning mirror is a myth, it need not be true because Greek's don't know how make and use the burning mirror because to make large burning mirror they need large piece of mirror and more more they used only copper as weapon during war time, so it is not possible them to make a burning mirror. But the speaker states that making the large curvature mirror is possible because they can joint the 1000 of small pieces and they made large burning mirror.
secondly, reading passage suggests that in order to burn the ship from such long distance at least it take ten minutes if ship not moving on the water but it's quite impossible according to the reading passage. but the lecturer refutes this by stating that Romans used the water proof material which highly flammable. So in order burn the ship, it need only few seconds only.
thirdly, reading passage states that when Greeks are fighting they use to fight with fire arrow from 30 meter distance and they are specialized in that so there no need of burning mirror for them. but this statement contrast by speaker by stating that Romans are very well cable to defend the fire arrows so the Greeks might have used the burning mirror technique to defeat the Romans.
finally, speaker says that because they used the small pieces of mirror to form large burning,the Romans was cable to defend the fir arrows and they use the water proof material on their ship because of all these reason Greeks used the burning mirror according to the speaker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng the reading passage burning mirror is a myth, it need not be true because Gree...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: more
...ror they need large piece of mirror and more more they used only copper as weapon during...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...ror they need large piece of mirror and more more they used only copper as weapon during...
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... piece of mirror and more more they used only copper as weapon during war time, ...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... they used only copper as weapon during war time, so it is not possible them to ...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...time, so it is not possible them to make a burning mirror. But the speaker states...
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... they can joint the 1000 of small pieces and they made large burning mirror. s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... and they made large burning mirror. secondly, reading passage suggests that in order...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...hip from such long distance at least it take ten minutes if ship not moving on the w...
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Suggestion: But
...sible according to the reading passage. but the lecturer refutes this by stating t...
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...to the reading passage. but the lecturer refutes this by stating that Romans used...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
...es this by stating that Romans used the water proof material which highly flammable. So in ...
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Suggestion: Thirdly
...ship, it need only few seconds only. thirdly, reading passage states that when Greek...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...age states that when Greeks are fighting they use to fight with fire arrow from 3...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...tes that when Greeks are fighting they use to fight with fire arrow from 30 meter ...
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Suggestion: But
...ere no need of burning mirror for them. but this statement contrast by speaker by s...
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Suggestion: Finally
...rror technique to defeat the Romans. finally, speaker says that because they used th...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , the
...l pieces of mirror to form large burning,the Romans was cable to defend the fir arro...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
... defend the fir arrows and they use the water proof material on their ship because of all t...
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...urning mirror according to the speaker.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.261695866417 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.188552188552 0.158904122519 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0606060606061 0.0723426182421 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572390572391 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572390572391 0.0277247811725 206% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.128828473217 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0572390572391 0.0370669169778 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.12908946071 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03367003367 0.0208969081088 161% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0942760942761 0.128158765124 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010101010101 0.0158828679856 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.0114777025283 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1570.0 1645.83664459 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 271.125827815 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83643122677 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334572490706 0.374372842146 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219330855019 0.287516216867 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.104089219331 0.187439937562 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0520446096654 0.113142543107 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.12908946071 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479553903346 0.539623497131 89% => OK
Word variations: 45.3318005475 53.8517498576 84% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 33.625 21.7502111507 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7099031618 49.3711431718 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.25 132.220823453 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 21.7502111507 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.878197800319 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.39072847682 590% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.5580855019 50.5018328374 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.41111111111 1.90840788429 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323812738342 0.451937469235 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.193313033346 0.142949733639 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.139902589693 0.0787303798458 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.729219534599 0.631733273073 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167181258678 0.139662658121 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176081126211 0.21790590567 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804425191031 0.0871468918476 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325646605226 0.414875509568 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0945945844939 0.0530846634433 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241301715391 0.332364718235 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513003298697 0.0446026805963 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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