The reading and the lecture are about the possibility of colonization of Venus by humans. The author of the reading asserts that it would be impractical to establish human colonies on the planet and provides supporting evidence for his view. Although, the lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. He is of the opinion that living on Venus would be Possible if suspending space stations are constructed a few kilometers above the Planet’s surface.
To begin with, the author argues that the pressure at the Venus’ surface is overwhelmingly high that no human or earthly instrument can endure it. The article mentions that it is about 90 times greater than the earth pressure. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that at the height that the floating stations are installed, the pressure is quite similar to the pressure exerted on the earth’s surface.
Secondly, the writer suggests that Venus atmosphere has not any oxygen and also on its surface no water reservoir has been identified. In the article, it is stated that oxygen and water have to be supplied from earth which would be impractical considering the amounts that is needed to be imported. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that in the stations, humans can use components in Venus’ atmosphere such as carbon dioxide and hydrogen sulfide to form water and oxygen through chemical reactions, thereby eliminating the earth travel suggestion.
Finally, the author posits that, Venus has highly packed clouds that do not allow the limited amount of sun rays penetrate the atmosphere and reach to the planet's surface. As a result, humans cannot implement solar energy to power their instruments. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is that in the height that the hanging stations are mounted, clouds are generally thinner, so it is possible to absorb more sun rays. Also, as part of rays are reflected from clouds, solar panels could be installed in a way to absorb both direct and reflected sunlight, thus increasing the amount of captured energy.
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- TOEFL T P O 43 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- TPO 51 Writing IntegratedHumans have long been fascinated by elephants, the largest land animal in the modern world. Social animals that live in herds, elephants are native to both Africa and Asia. Their large ears, long trunk, and long life span have mad 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vides supporting evidence for his view. Although, the lecturer challenges the claims mad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 338.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82387576925 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547337278107 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8060823875 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181927794747 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05742073192 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511813695844 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109529725524 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561669705268 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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