Movies re popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular.
During the past decades, technological advancements have changed people’s life dramatically (afarin vase qeyd). One of the most influential impacts of technologies has to do with the movie industry. Since the arrival of primitive video recorders, people have found out about its potential and therefore, started to take advantage of it. Crowded cinemas where people went to watch silent movies about an ordinary life event, prove this claim. The reason of popularity of movies among people are manifold, but two which have more significance are elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
First, it goes without saying that movies are a convenient and an easy-to-use means by which people get entertained. Almost every city has a movie theater and each family enjoys the luxury of a TV, two common ways to watch a movie. Since people have different tastes and like different kinds of movies, producers have been trying to meet all these demands by providing them with a variety of movies/products in different genres. For instance, nowadays, since people are experiencing high amounts of stress in their daily lives, they are keen about comedy, and watching this genre of movies helps them to relieve those tensions and forget, at least for a moment, about all the hardships they had gone through.
Another reason that makes movies of people everywhere is the fact that movies are an artistic way to convey a wide range of information and to evoke particular emotions. One can see how people cry or laugh in a cinema by watching a movie, indicating movies deeply/massively/undeniably influence their mood. Moreover, some movies are based on real-life events such as wars or biographies of famous people, providing people with detailed information about that incident or person, thereby, giving the audience the chance to enhance their knowledge or pay homage to a forgotten hero.
To sum up, by taking account all the above mentioned factors into account, it stands to reason that why people love movies. People can peace their mind and change their otherwise foul moods (afarin) by spending even a short time watching a movie, and at the same time, gathering valuable data. It is because of these reasons that shortly after discovery of video recorders, the movie industry absorbed a vast/huge/great number of people’s as well as investors which led it to become a world-wide industry with billions of dollars of transactions every year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, at least, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 30.3222958057 228% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1373.03311258 149% => OK
No of words: 397.0 270.72406181 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16120906801 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9325330372 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 145.348785872 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596977329975 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 419.366225166 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7129556 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190135570939 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067653466837 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434489151484 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114752432025 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01975089529 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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