The passage and lecture about the artificial reefs, the writer demonstrates three benefits of artificial reefs for increasing suitible habitat for fish. the lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He says several scientists belivieve, the artificial reefs harm to the fishs.
First, the author states, artificial reefs can improve economic of small fishs, because they are able to create theire own private locations. This point challenged by professor. He claim, the artificail reefs do not
have longer benefits, however, they do not nessesary to increase all types of fishs, in addition, these reefs attract fishs to distance places, therefore lead to decrease fishs population.
Second, the article elaborates, the precious metals used for buildind of artificial reefs are found in littil amount in earth, this give apportunity ton asteroids to brings these metel to the earth,and colonists could pay more, as a result the asteroida will profit from these metals. This arrguments rebutts by professors, He illustrate, secret places for artifecial reefs exposed them to dengerous of fishing bby larg nets from fisher how do not know about their location, also lead to destroy the artificial reefs in shallow water.
Finally, the author, believes, artificial reefs decrease polution, due to the fact that, they are concidered as away toercycle materials. In the other hand, the lecturer thought, artificial reefs is abad idea. He explain that by mention example of reefs that made from collection of car tires, these reefs undergo to seperation in stronge storms, consequntly , the seperated parts will spread in the water and lead to polution whichb effect the life of marines which life in the water.
The passage and lecture about the artificial reefs, the writer demonstrates three benefits of artificial reefs for increasing suitible habitat for fish. the lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He says several scientists belivieve, the artificial reefs harm to the fishs.
First, the author states, artificial reefs can improve economic of small fishs, because they are able to create theire own private locations. This point challenged by professor. He claim, the artificail reefs do not
have longer benefits, however, they do not nessesary to increase all types of fishs, in addition, these reefs attract fishs to distance places, therefore lead to decrease fishs population.
Second, the article elaborates, the precious metals used for buildind of artificial reefs are found in littil amount in earth, this give apportunity ton asteroids to brings these metel to the earth,and colonists could pay more, as a result the asteroida will profit from these metals. This arrguments rebutts by professors, He illustrate, secret places for artifecial reefs exposed them to dengerous of fishing bby larg nets from fisher how do not know about their location, also lead to destroy the artificial reefs in shallow water.
Finally, the author, believes, artificial reefs decrease polution, due to the fact that, they are concidered as away toercycle materials. In the other hand, the lecturer thought, artificial reefs is abad idea. He explain that by mention example of reefs that made from collection of car tires, these reefs undergo to seperation in stronge storms, consequntly , the seperated parts will spread in the water and lead to polution whichb effect the life of marines which life in the water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32841328413 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6351447568 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.6771877754 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511316634285 0.272083759551 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206487251539 0.0996497079465 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180014444914 0.0662205650399 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296086940128 0.162205337803 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.271575618204 0.0443174109184 613% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.