The passage and lecture about replacement of the cars ' sours of power from the internal combustion engine to fuel cell engine which use hydrogen to create electrcity. The author believes, using of fuel cell engine solve problems that caused by internal combustion engine. The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in passage. She says, using of hydrogen to produce electicity, in turn, powers the cars dose not solve the problems.
First, the author stats that hydrogen needed for fuel cell ingine avaliable and can not be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point challenge by lecturer. She says that we should use a pure hydrogen for produce fuel and it is find in combounds like in water and it is difficul to store pure hydrogen because we need a very low tempreture to keep it, so this opposit to what the aothor said.
Second, the author believes, replace internal combution engine by fuel cell ingine which use hydrogen will reduce the polution. This argument rebuttes by lecturer. She suggested, to obtain a pure hydrogen, we do a lot of prossing of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types of polution. so polution occur from chemical reaction to obtain hydrogen rather than from cars.
Finally, The author claims, cars use hydrogen need less fuel than that use internal fuel combustion. So spend less money and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Production of pure hydrogen needs chemical prossesing, also, the cars manufactuers need expensive equipement to make these type of transportation, if they use a cheap equipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these type of cars more than the money which may save from litte amount of hydrogen to generate the electricity that power the cars.
The passage and lecture about replacement of the cars ' sours of power from the internal combustion engine to fuel cell engine which use hydrogen to create electrcity. The author believes, using of fuel cell engine solve problems that caused by internal combustion engine. The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in passage. She says, using of hydrogen to produce electicity, in turn, powers the cars dose not solve the problems.
First, the author stats that hydrogen needed for fuel cell ingine avaliable and can not be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point challenge by lecturer. She says that we should use a pure hydrogen for produce fuel and it is find in combounds like in water and it is difficul to store pure hydrogen because we need a very low tempreture to keep it, so this opposit to what the aothor said.
Second, the author believes, replace internal combution engine by fuel cell ingine which use hydrogen will reduce the polution. This argument rebuttes by lecturer. She suggested, to obtain a pure hydrogen, we do a lot of prossing of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types of polution. so polution occur from chemical reaction to obtain hydrogen rather than from cars.
Finally, The author claims, cars use hydrogen need less fuel than that use internal fuel combustion. So spend less money and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Production of pure hydrogen needs chemical prossesing, also, the cars manufactuers need expensive equipement to make these type of transportation, if they use a cheap equipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these type of cars more than the money which may save from litte amount of hydrogen to generate the electricity that power the cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The passage and lecture about replacemen...
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...nd lecture about replacement of the cars sours of power from the internal combust...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t caused by internal combustion engine. The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in ...
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... the cars dose not solve the problems. First, the author stats that hydrogen ne...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...gine avaliable and can not be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point ...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: InternalThis
...t be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point challenge by lecturer. She says t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... this opposit to what the aothor said. Second, the author believes, replace int...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types o...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types o...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reaction' or 'these reactions'?
Suggestion: this reaction; these reactions
...which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types of polution. so ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ion produce a lot of types of polution. so polution occur from chemical reaction t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...obtain hydrogen rather than from cars. Finally, The author claims, cars use hyd...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...o spend less money and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Produ...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...y and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Production of pure hydro...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... prossesing, also, the cars manufactuers need expensive equipement to make these ...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...uipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these typ...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...uipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these typ...
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Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e type of cars more than the money which may save from litte amount of hydrogen t...
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Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of hydrogen to generate the electricity that power the cars.
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Line 4, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the electricity that power the cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02657807309 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60333718297 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498338870432 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.640104075 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0555555556 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48751916609 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154078147331 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215280368715 0.0662205650399 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324464039047 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.242639770567 0.0443174109184 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage and lecture about replacemen...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd lecture about replacement of the cars sours of power from the internal combust...
^^
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t caused by internal combustion engine. The lecturer casts doubt on claims made in ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the cars dose not solve the problems. First, the author stats that hydrogen ne...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...gine avaliable and can not be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point ...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: InternalThis
...t be depleted. like diesel or gasoline. internalThis point challenge by lecturer. She says t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this opposit to what the aothor said. Second, the author believes, replace int...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: furthermore,
...of reaction which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reaction' or 'these reactions'?
Suggestion: this reaction; these reactions
...which need amount of enery. furthermore these reaction produce a lot of types of polution. so ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ion produce a lot of types of polution. so polution occur from chemical reaction t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...obtain hydrogen rather than from cars. Finally, The author claims, cars use hyd...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...o spend less money and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Produ...
^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...y and more effective. on the other hand,the lecturer says. Production of pure hydro...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... prossesing, also, the cars manufactuers need expensive equipement to make these ...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...uipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these typ...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...uipement this lead to bad quatity cars. therefore will spend money to manufacte these typ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e type of cars more than the money which may save from litte amount of hydrogen t...
^^
Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of hydrogen to generate the electricity that power the cars.
^^
Line 4, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the electricity that power the cars.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02657807309 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60333718297 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498338870432 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.640104075 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0555555556 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48751916609 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154078147331 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215280368715 0.0662205650399 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324464039047 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.242639770567 0.0443174109184 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.