A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
All people are different. Some prefer to have a dinamic life and be busy all the time, while the others tend to have a quiet lifestile. Therefore, the first ones mostly choose to live in the big cities, when the latest spend their lifetime in the countryside. I have lived in a megapolis for a while, but then I moved to a rural area. This way, if a person moves to my town I know exactly what he/she is going to like and dislike in this place.
First of all, it is very quiet environment in the country, which gives the locals the feelling of protection. As soon as there are not many people live in my small town, comperably to a big city, the crime situation here is preaty satisfactory. All neighbors know each other and keep their eyes if something unusual takes place. For example, when recently my husbant saw two strangers aroung a neighbors` house, while they where out of the town, he called to police. In fact, the police arrested the strangers and prevented a crime, because the two gues tried to brake into the nighbor`s house. The situations like that are very rare for the community and I am not affread to let my kids walk freely and play around. As you see, the life in the remote places is safe.
Secondly, the relaxing atmoshere in my town contributes to the face to face communication of the dwellers. Because of the lack of theaters and studiums with intertaining programs around, families get together very often. They play different games on their back yards, cook delicious food together and enjoy the buauty of the country nature. Although the person, who is going to move to my community can find it boring, he/she always can get into a car and drive to the neighboring big city, where a variety of intertainment is presented. To that end, the people who live in the countryside have close communication with their friends and relatives, which facilitates to the tight relations between them.
Finally, the environment in my town is clean, which let locals stay healthy and live longer. For instance, the area lacks the taffic problems. Moreover, it surounded by woods. The plenty of the trees consumes carbon dioxide and emits pure oxygen. It maitains clean air around the community and decreases the number of people saffer from desiases. As an argument to support this statement, I recently read in a magazine, that the duration of life of country residents is longer than the dwellers of the biger cities. Therefore, the person is going to consider it as an advantage of living in my town.
To conclude, I think that the person, who is planing to move to my community, will definitely appreciate the safe, friendly, and healthy aspects of the living in my town, even if the life in here sometimes may seems boring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er, it surounded by woods. The plenty of the trees consumes carbon dioxide and em...
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...read in a magazine, that the duration of life of country residents is longer than...
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...ife in here sometimes may seems boring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 30.3222958057 221% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1373.03311258 166% => OK
No of words: 485.0 270.72406181 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69278350515 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65115194834 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 145.348785872 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527835051546 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 419.366225166 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 5.0 0.116997792494 4274% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 1.25165562914 959% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.683890155 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.04 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163020413466 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427637232183 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606183518413 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984334210647 0.162205337803 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323901292262 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 63.6247240618 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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