Physical activity is the best way to keep a healthy body and a healthy mind. Do you believe this? Do you practice a physical activity? If you do, what and why? If not, why?
Sport activities has a tremendous impact on people's health. From my vantage point, I wholeheartedly believe that individuals should perform work out activities for the following reasons.
To begin with, physical activities could improve people's wellness. For instance, today, many people have different types of diseases due to fonding in unhealthy food. These foods have harmful kind lipid-like cholesterol. Cholesterol has a negative impact on people's health by causing many diseases like high blood pressure, which is the most common disorder in these days. When people perform the exercise, dangerous lipid will reduce in their body because the weight will be dropped by playing physical activities. As a result, cholesterol is reduced in the body. On the other word, the ability to expose for many diseases will drop because reducing in deleterious lipid . Consequently, performing sport games could enhance people's health by prevent them from expose to plenty disorders.
In addition. spost activities could have a positive influence on people's personality, especially for young's people. For example, my brother was very shy when he was in high school. Also, he was obese because he liked to eat. he enrolled in sports teams in order to loos his weight. His coach motivated him and trained him very well That help him to have an athletic body. he becomes more confident and never shy. instead of before. He did not like his body's shape because he had overweight. being engaged in physical activities, help him to be more confident by cooperating and collaboration with his friend in the sport's team. it has a positive effect on his life. Therefore, Being engaged in sports teams could have a tremendous impact on individual,s life
To wrap it up, For all a contemplating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20486111111 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80660594186 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9599935837 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.380952381 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.058367513866 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188839120257 0.0996497079465 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322241248289 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395243779922 0.162205337803 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318595254046 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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