Possible solutions to save frogs from extinction.

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Possible solutions to save frogs from extinction.

The reading asserts that since the population of frogs is diminishing as time goes by, we should take some ‎actions in order to save them from extinction and proposes three potential solutions in order to do so. The ‎lecturer, however, finds the solutions problematic and casts doubt on the solutions proposed by the author ‎of the reading.‎

The author argues that we should change the law in a way that it would prohibit farmers from using ‎pesticides, for when pesticides enter frog's body, they harm frog by attacking frog's nervous system. ‎Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that it cannot be such a practical solution. Forcing farmers not ‎to use pesticides is neither economical nor fair, as they are competing in their business and it can ‎eventually end up in losing crops and lower yields.‎

Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that they should try to eliminate a kind of fungus and ‎cure the infected frogs by the medications, which has been recently discovered by the researchers. On ‎contrary, the lecturer underlies the fact that using treatment on a large scale is extremely hard to carry ‎out, because they would need to administer the medication to the frogs, one by one. additionally, they ‎would need to execute the same action on their next generations as well, which can be considered a hard ‎and expensive action to do.‎

Finally, the reading asserts that in order to save frog's habitat, we should protect lakes and marshes from ‎excessive water use. In contrast, the lecturer dismisses this issue due to the fact that saving frog's ‎population cannot be accomplished by saving wetlands, but by countering global warming. Moreover, she ‎expresses that entire species go extinct, because of global warming and we cannot just use less water ‎instead of facing global warming.‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...posed by the author ‎of the reading.‎ The author argues that we should change the...
^^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...he medication to the frogs, one by one. additionally, they ‎would need to execute the same a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, in contrast, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9164114174 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4811979758 49.2860985944 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.0 110.228320801 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 21.698381199 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21947501556 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923643519995 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891415639928 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135165250393 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778596509022 0.0443174109184 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.3589403974 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.0289183223 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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