Procrastinational problem is a serious disorder that affects people life in a job or project.
In this set of materials, the author and the professor are discussing the impacts of procrastination problem over the people life. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer argues that procrastination is simple disorder other maintain that she claims risky results, if it is not treatment. She provides some reasons which are spend time and delay to work other day, blaming external factors when they work on a job or other thing. The professor invalidates the author assertions; in all aspects and demonstrates that procrastination serious disorder; it affects people life. The details of the professor’s refutation are revealed in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, Procrastination affects people who can not spend time productively. They work on a Project which includes details about plans or structural analyze; they tend to delay whole works other day. Moreover, they want whole conditions are on way, and there is no serious problem. İf a problem happen suddenly in the Project, they may withstand on all progress. These people are not perform stable behaviours whose may gives some hazard for work place communication. They tend to postpone job travels and meetings in order to escape responsibility. İt shows randomly progress, although you aware of the disorders.You should monitored seriously, and gives report to managers or head of Office.
Secondly, they try to blame external factors during a project or job so that is not taken responsibility among the workers. Because of this behave, other workers have more job or possible risks. Risk is an external factor that occur with important conditions any time; because they are found with you. Though, many serious rules might found in working areas, however they prefer to subjective solution for them.
To sum up, Procrastination may be treatment due to a therapy in the clinical center or monitored an experienced advisor. This serious problem can not ignore long time in the work condition. These people require interest for treatment; you should be behave objectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o delay whole works other day. Moreover, they want whole conditions are on way, a...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...d on all progress. These people are not perform stable behaviours whose may gives some ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...ss, although you aware of the disorders.You should monitored seriously, and gives r...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'behaved'?
Suggestion: behaved
...e interest for treatment; you should be behave objectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36280487805 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01186029293 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4926630625 49.2860985944 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5789473684 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 4.45695364238 269% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302913671751 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889596635186 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810496455735 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17186854312 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070703871531 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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