The American President Clay's life that wrong known aspects of life
In this set of materials, the writer and the lecturer are discussing the influences of American Elections at 1812. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer offers that president Clay has heroic figure in American History other claims that he is known many of drawbacks which he did during presidential mission. There are found some reasons; he enforced laws, pressures the congress to pass acts and leads to kill hundreds of indians people. The lecturer invalidates the writer’s assertions in all aspects and demonstrates that president Clay is nat known heroic person in the American History that he has negative aspects. The details of the professor’s refutation are explained in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, President Clay used laws subjective aim which includes serious results. For instance, his friend was elected by clay that is moral risk to the community.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws for own benefits,although he is a fame president and general in the past times.He has strengthened power via laws and not provide an equal executive.
Secondly, he is known with bad fame among The American Indians,because American forces kill hundreds of Creek Indians in the battle. Moreover, he forced to removal Cherooke Indians from their land,cause of natural sources.This behaviour oppose the real human acts that in our time. In the Clay time, big part of the community believe in Clay whatever he want to do it.So, he get to force over Indian tribes that are known peaceful people. But, sources more important than humanity for Clay.
To sum up, books include different story about Clays, he has known a historical figure American History. The boos portrayed powerful, respectful and hero, these are common features. Especially, lecturer point out Clay’s need to limitless power and responsibility face to laws in order to use own benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts. For instance, his friend was elected by clay that is moral risk to the commun...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...lay that is moral risk to the community.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforc...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enforces'.
Suggestion: enforces
...ity.To pass The Chief Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...f Executive law, he enforce to congress.He used constitutional laws for own benefi...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...sed constitutional laws for own benefits,although he is a fame president and general in t...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...president and general in the past times.He has strengthened power via laws and not...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...with bad fame among The American Indians,because American forces kill hundreds of Creek ...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cause
...removal Cherooke Indians from their land,cause of natural sources.This behaviour oppos...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: This
...rom their land,cause of natural sources.This behaviour oppose the real human acts th...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'opposes'.
Suggestion: opposes
...cause of natural sources.This behaviour oppose the real human acts that in our time. I...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...e community believe in Clay whatever he want to do it.So, he get to force over India...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...lieve in Clay whatever he want to do it.So, he get to force over Indian tribes tha...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...n Clay whatever he want to do it.So, he get to force over Indian tribes that are kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32580645161 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99108804623 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603225806452 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3688351516 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185494265229 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668649179831 0.0996497079465 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595143416091 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110450865056 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354888551298 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.