Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were cap
The article presents three arguments why the structures found inside fossilized trees, which is 200 million years old, were not created by bees. However, all of them are questioned in the lecture.
For starters, while the lecturer concedes that no bee fossil of 200 million years old was found, she believes that the reason is because bees then could hardly be fossilized. Because bees could only be fossilized within sticky liquid produced by certain kinds of tree species, which were quite rare back then.
Second, she does accept that modern bees survive on flowering plants, but she does not believe that this had to apply to 200 million years ago. She points out that it might be possible for bees to feed on other kinds of plants, and that it was only after flowering plants evolved that bees began to adapt to a different way of survival.
Finally, although she admits that no cap of a spiral pattern was found in the structures, she says there is chemical evidence that supports the theory. chemical study shows the type of water-proof material used in modern bee nests could also be found in those structures.
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- Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were cap 3
- The article presents three arguments why pterosaurs were not capable of powered flight. However, all of them are questioned in the lecture.For starters, in contrast to what the reading suggests, that pterosaurs are cold-blooded animals that cannot generat 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- Offering employees the option of a four-day workweek won't affect the company profits, economic conditions or the lives of employees in the ways the reading suggests. 81
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...was found, she believes that the reason is because bees then could hardly be fossilized. B...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Chemical
...ical evidence that supports the theory. chemical study shows the type of water-proof mat...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 193.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84455958549 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32452580671 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3478080711 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0316379060276 0.272083759551 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158869007189 0.0996497079465 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231872132773 0.0662205650399 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0229624793749 0.162205337803 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018877921936 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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