the reading passage says that fossil reports are not great a reliability when compare with the soft tissue examination, according to the reading passage tissue examination gives more accurate result when compare with fossil reports.
firstly, reading passage claims that tissue examination is more important than fossil records because the fossils are gradually become the minerals so that can't useful for the fossil records. to prove that reading passage states that T-rex is tissue structure which gives the whole detail of dinosaur even it lives 70 million years ago.
but the speakers refutes that information by stating that when the animal died it goes for decomposition and leads some kind colonized debris that can't be blood vessel but according the reading passage it is blood vessel.
secondly, reading passage states that scientist found the sphere like structure in the bones, they said that is red blood cell because of color, dark red color due to the iron content but the lecturer explains that most of the animals are not having the red blood cell and their blood cell are different. so that red color may be due to some kind minerals rather than the red blood cell.
thirdly, according the reading passage the collagen tissue can preserve for long time like millions of years. but speaker suggests that the preservation capacity for the collagen tissue only about 100 thousands of year and not more than that, so the tissue examination itself can not provide the exact report of animal which was lived more than millions of years ago/
further more professor explains that t rex could be from the skin because skin also made of collagen tissue only.
to conclude according the professot point of view fossil reports are much accurate than the tissue examination reports.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.31875 0.261695866417 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.14375 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.084375 0.0723426182421 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0435111971325 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.01875 0.0277247811725 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1375 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.034375 0.0370669169778 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35591937454 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015625 0.0208969081088 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.096875 0.128158765124 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01875 0.0158828679856 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015625 0.0114777025283 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1828.0 1645.83664459 111% => OK
No of words: 296.0 271.125827815 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17567567568 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385135135135 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273648648649 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165540540541 0.187439937562 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0878378378378 0.113142543107 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35591937454 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.539623497131 91% => OK
Word variations: 48.163360733 53.8517498576 89% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 32.8888888889 21.7502111507 151% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.388188893 49.3711431718 183% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.111111111 132.220823453 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 21.7502111507 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.878197800319 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 3.39072847682 560% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.2537537538 50.5018328374 119% => OK
Elegance: 2.30882352941 1.90840788429 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377529991017 0.451937469235 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.226751960315 0.142949733639 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.12298441026 0.0787303798458 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.866795046734 0.631733273073 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139796221509 0.139662658121 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216937398122 0.21790590567 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550234978337 0.0871468918476 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281013150437 0.414875509568 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0864405779431 0.0530846634433 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223870767842 0.332364718235 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610864249481 0.0446026805963 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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