Rise in sea level
The article and the lecture are both about the causes of increase of sea level.The passage states that the rise of water in the sea level is unknown.The lecturer
disputes this claim in the article. His position is that the increase at the sea level is known.
According to the reading the reason for the rise is in sea water is unknown. The argument is challenged by the lecturer.He claims that melting of permofrost
is responsible for the rise of sea level.
Secondly,the author state that NASA doesn't have a reason for the rise at the sea level.The lecturer , however, asserts that NASA can not fully
say that they can not account for the rise of sea level when they indirectly have an explanation scientifically and thisrise in seal level is due to human activities.
Finally, the author state that the sea level flunctuate and there is no need to be worried.In contrast, the lecturer's stance is that something
must be done now before the sea level takes over all the land.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...out the causes of increase of sea level.The passage states that the rise of water i...
^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...se of water in the sea level is unknown.The lecturer disputes this claim in the ar...
^^^
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se of water in the sea level is unknown.The lecturer disputes this claim in the ar...
^^^
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
... argument is challenged by the lecturer.He claims that melting of permofrost is r...
^^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...e for the rise of sea level. Secondly,the author state that NASA doesnt have a re...
^^^^
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Secondly,the author state that NASA doesnt have a reason for the rise at the sea l...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... a reason for the rise at the sea level.The lecturer , however, asserts that NASA c...
^^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r the rise at the sea level.The lecturer , however, asserts that NASA can not full...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...uate and there is no need to be worried.In contrast, the lecturers stance is that ...
^^
Line 10, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
... no need to be worried.In contrast, the lecturers stance is that something must be done ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 1373.03311258 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 270.72406181 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78488372093 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60759639442 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 145.348785872 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.154899261 49.2860985944 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.594391162281 0.272083759551 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.337495040668 0.0996497079465 339% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614194403809 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318588615594 0.162205337803 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151054287265 0.0443174109184 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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