The reading and the lecture are both about the possible causes to the declining of sea otter population. The author is of the opinion that environmental pollution is the main reason that leads to the phenomena. He feels this way for three reasons which elaborated in the article. However, the lecturer challenges the claims made by the author.
To begin with, the author argues that toxic chemicals along the western coast can be fatal to the sea otter. Furthermore, it is mentioned in the article that water samples collected from specific area shows the evidence of increasing levels of these chemicals. In contrast, the professor rebuts this by stating that if the sea otter are died because of infections, their dead bodies would be washed on the coast, yet there's not even a corpse of sea otter found on the coast. Despite of this fact, she also stresses that the reduction of sea otter is caused by predators since being eaten just makes the whole body disappear.
Secondly, the writer posits that not only the sea otter but other sea mammals have also been declining. In the reading, it is stated that the pollutions endanger the entire ecosystem, but the orca can survive by consuming much larger preys such as whales . The professor opposes the idea by bringing up the point that whales have been hunting by human recently. So orcas might have just changed their diet to predate on smaller preys.
Lastly, the writer suggests that some areas are polluted more severely and eventually cause the deaths of the sea otter. It is said in the article that the research of the directions of ocean currents can lead to concentrations of pollution at specific areas. The lecturer contends by suggesting that the orca as a predator can hardly access the shallow and rocky coast since they are enormous.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...odies would be washed on the coast, yet theres not even a corpse of sea otter found on...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nsuming much larger preys such as whales . The professor opposes the idea by bring...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85760517799 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47763985914 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7755947082 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287788624987 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872283822111 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977006751553 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15456516111 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838894468546 0.0443174109184 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...odies would be washed on the coast, yet theres not even a corpse of sea otter found on...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nsuming much larger preys such as whales . The professor opposes the idea by bring...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85760517799 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47763985914 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7755947082 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287788624987 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872283822111 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977006751553 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15456516111 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838894468546 0.0443174109184 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.