Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Most people believe that internet brings us so many problems, while the others believe in the contrast. Personally, I believe that internet one of the most powerful inventions in the world. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore some of them in the following essay.
To begin, internet provides so many sources for education. Education or getting knowledge are no longer by only physical classes or at schools, however, it became more accessible that of fortune of the internet. In the past, before internet, if students couldn't afford going to school, they wouldn't educate, then became illiterate. However, nowadays, if someone wants to not go to school at all, he still has the chance to be literate. For example, if someone has a desire to study computer science, he pr she doesn't have to go to collage; as there are several online sources that provide people with the suitable courses that fit their background. Therefore, without internet, how was the life before? It was so hard and no chances as much as we have to educate your-self.
Second, internet doesn't cause problem, it solves most of problems that we had. This is best exemplified by my personal experience. Three years ago, I decided to enhance my English skills. Because I was working, I couldn't find either the time or the place which allign with my work condition. If there is no internet with its rich resources in teaching English, I wouldn't learnt English. Thus, internet has a tremendous power in easing things and makes it possible. Internet is an a magic tool that brings us the world in our hands, wherever we are, whatever we want.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that internet is a significant invention has been known till now. This is because it has so many education resources that bring us school at home and make eduacation process more accessible for anyone. Moreover, internet helps us to overcome several problems that preclude the education process, in particular, with our daily work; as it eases taking courses wherever we are and at any time. Thus, internet is a problem's solution not creating problems.
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the problems') or simply say ''most problems''.
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...re and at any time. Thus, internet is a problems solution not creating problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 361.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88088642659 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63611214742 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562326869806 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 1.25165562914 719% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9450563845 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9047619048 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166526703293 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484400061966 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335813482226 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100650213953 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00319943600868 0.0443174109184 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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