some people to take a position in a company and work for the company. other people think it is better to go into business for themselves. which do you think is better? give reasons and examples to support your response.
That choosing job, which one the most important choices in our life, plays crucial role in our life is an undeniable fact. I prefer that taking a position in a company and I work for a company instead of going into business for myself. Should I realize that advantages of working in a company in our life, I will ponder over it much more scrupulously. This issue has recently been the topic debate among my friends.
I believe that, if I choose my carrier life in a suitable company, I will have a secure job. It’s better than I go into business myself. There are my justification, to begin with, I work in a company that this company protects their employees and I can get the loan from the company. If I have a problem, a company will support me. In addition, I know that I receive my salary every month. Therefore, it’s important for me I have a secure income every month. The second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that I had one friend that he worked in own business. A dishonest person defrauded my friend and all of her worth was stolen by him. He is working in a restaurant now, consequently taking a position in a company is better than going into a business. The last but not the least working in a company is really soothing a relaxing for me. Whenever I go to a company I feel refreshed.
Having discuss the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well, this perspective is love. I was loved when I went to the company for working. I see a pretty girl, and I have been loved him since 2017. hence, I like working for a company.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the advantages of taking a position in accompany is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to comprehending the significance of working in a company, and can improve several aspects of our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 876, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y is really soothing a relaxing for me. Whenever I go to a company I feel refreshed. H...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
..., and I have been loved him since 2017. hence, I like working for a company. By tak...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an improve several aspects of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 22.412803532 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57464788732 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85518214243 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501408450704 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0321281112 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8181818182 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253810079466 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825593121928 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871813651181 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143855792845 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575119048261 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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