Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or dis agree with this point of view? Why or why not?
Benefits and drawbacks of human population needs new farmland, housing and industry has been a controversial issue in the community lately. While some people claim that endangered animals face to big extinction others maintain that human population increase continually who need new farmland or job. Although the last side have several concern about human generation of future, I’m of the opinion that protect endangered animals which have limited life area, food and short life cycle. İf these animals sources are depleted by humans, it would be some risks which are; the next human generations can’t see endangered animals. Secondly, these animals are important balance of nature cycle. The last one, Human needs not important than other animals. I will examine the details of my support with some tangible and examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, people need extremely sources in the last century when the world has undergone big changes. People depleted sources deeply that they do not concern about extinction. Although humanity pass a milestone in the technology era, they ignore big damage of nature. Some kinds of endangered animals face big extinction. For example, some kinds of birds can not find flying route that aim to fertilizing for next generation. American eagles are bad example for it. Because people hunted them for hunting other animals due to feeding their family. Now, only a few american eagle maybe find in the nature, and they are protect national laws. İf people do not change consumer habits, next generations will not see American eagle.
Secondly, some people use pesticides which remove endangered kinds of animals. Because they give some harm to their farmland where they grow plants for feeding urban population. But they neglect to protect they who are crucial part of nature. For example, some kinds of snakes are poison, and they could kill people for which they aim to take away them in farmland. On te contrary. These animals are basic kinds of nature; they feeding with rats which give harm wheat lands and other agricultural area. Moreover. They are disease carrier of some risky illness so that contained to people. İf people do not aware of this balance, they will face some illness.
Lastly, human population grow day by day whomever do not hinder of it. Harsh rule can not stop population booms, because industry need big human source in order to product goods. Via technology, people carry out balance that need strict laws and serious interest part of all community in the world. They should be open minded and objectify, due to this, people can protect endangered kinds of animals. They are heritage of our ancestor for next generation. Technological developments are main point of balancing that can found new balance in the habitat of endangered kinds of animals.
To sum up, people must change their consumer behaviours and habits. The world population, especially some continents, will grow doubled. Many government can not stop it. Only all of community may be find with together, and contact temporarily, they can hinder of big extinction risks. People must respect of endangered animals life areas, because they have equal rights like us in the surface of world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 5.04856512141 416% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2729.0 1373.03311258 199% => OK
No of words: 527.0 270.72406181 195% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17836812144 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.04702891845 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50730993846 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 145.348785872 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480075901328 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 419.366225166 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 13.0662251656 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2352179572 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9714285714 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0571428571 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82857142857 7.06452816374 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 4.45695364238 269% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240099201592 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656288618031 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044779499629 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142456532614 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442824741694 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 63.6247240618 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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