Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? Those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, which idea do you agree with?
Nowadays, deciding to have children and raising them properly is becoming a significant issue. Some parents think that they have an obligation to do something in any of their child’s nurturing steps. This is gradually gaining more attention because sometimes parents decide about every aspect of their children like their leisure time which I am absolutely against any of the parents’ involvement due to many reasons.
First, parents’ interference about their children free time is doing to kill the sense of joy and interest in them. They feel that they are having no control over anything in their lives. So, they react impulsively to the other works their mothers or fathers expect them to fulfill. Because, they watch that every action is being forced to them and this will leads to their resist against their parents will consequently. I strongly believe that young people must be set free to decide for themselves. They should be taught to pursue their dreams and joys under their parents’ observation. This prepares them properly for their bright future which they wish to have.
Secondly, letting children to choose their interests and manage their own free times is a step toward responsibility. Since, young people make their mistakes unintentionally when they are doing something that they like. If parents dictate every move and decision of their children, they will accept no responsibility for them. They chiefly persuade their parents that it is the choice that they made for them and they should accept its consequences accordingly. However, children tend to do no mistakes in the actions and assignments that they love to perform.
In conclusion, parents must give some space for their children to do whatever they desire. This will show them that they can follow their dreams. On the other side, it gives the parents the chance to ask them about their actions and make them responsible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...n is being forced to them and this will leads to their resist against their parents w...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... times is a step toward responsibility. Since, young people make their mistakes unint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 22.412803532 286% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17891373802 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70239196879 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523961661342 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.948462938 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0555555556 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343329587162 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135144612196 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643938830272 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245068677323 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419480487916 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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