Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There is no doubt that one of the most significant issues that the majority of people consider before planning for a trip is to decide about having a companion or being alone on the trip. when it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I strongly incline to travel with other people. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and examples to support my viewpoint.
First of all, it should be stated that traveling alone gives us the chance to be independent and free. Moreover, as all people say, traveling on your own has great benefits and memories which should be done by everyone in spite of the fact that it is not totally safe. From my experience, once I went on a journey alone I took a nap on the park when I woke up, I understood my money and passport had been stolen which caused me to experience worse days in my life.
On the other hand, it would be very pleased to be companies by others because it can provide you with more information and help. For example, as everyone says many hands make light work, when you go on a camping trip you can pitch your tent easily.
Last but not least, traveling with someone who has common with you can be more fun and satisfying as well. it is commonly claimed that going on a journey with friends in the best way to relax and get rid of the busy lifestyle and working pressure.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I seriously prefer to travel with a companion because it gives me a sense of confidence and pleasure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4623655914 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49837500662 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.237564479 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254265730701 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912640178022 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489452077532 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132585740708 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031980677871 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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