TPO 33, Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.

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TPO 33, Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.

There is no doubt that one of the most significant skill for everyone is working as a team member.So teachers define that assignments should be done by students alone or together based on their criteria and abilities which students should learn through doing these tasks. Also, when it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I strongly believe that the benefits of working together as a team member are undeniable for some reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the main reason why I hold this idea is that, working together helps students to learn some skills from each other and gives them a big chance of sharing their ideas to make the best. these advantages are mostly obvious when you compare the result. A simple example will suffice to illustrate my viewpoint is that if they study alone, they will always see their ideas from the same perspective which causes them not to improve their skills.
Secondly, members in the group can motivate and support each other as well because different specialists in different fields can compensate the others' lacking of kind of knowledge. In addition, sometimes they do not achieve their goals and fail. Thus, they need to be stimulated to never give up. From my experience, when I was a university student, I had to work on a group for my proposal and I was disappointed to meet the deadline but other members encourage me and told we would be successful.
Last but not least, studies have shown that working alone, especially for a long periods of time for pupils, can become monotonous and unchallenged. On the contrary, when leaners organize a group for completing their tasks they can break monotony and make learing more enjoyable.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons and as people say that None of us is as smart as all of us, I totally agree with that it is much more beneficial to work together on a group project than work alone.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...or everyone is working as a team member.So teachers define that assignments should...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...f sharing their ideas to make the best. these advantages are mostly obvious when you ...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'period'?
Suggestion: period
...at working alone, especially for a long periods of time for pupils, can become monotono...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78466076696 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61952217651 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578171091445 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8740663942 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25774577219 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870097021104 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568677560505 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139105047078 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495935466788 0.0645574589148 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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