sound
The reading and lecture are both about whether scientists can detect the unusual sounds that sailors could hear about twenty years or not. The passage presents three explanations to posit why it is a mysterious phenomenon since scientists cannot recognize any solid moving of submarine in the ocean. The professor, however, refutes all of those explanations.
To begin with, the author of the reading claims that orca whales are a kind of animal produce sounds, and because they are occupying with ritual, make this sound, and the submarine cannot detect their voices. Nevertheless, the professor opposes this claim by mentioning that this theory is implausible since whales live in the superficial ocean and submarine located in the depth of the sea, so whale's voice, which has not to hear by sailors.
Secondly, the article posits that in the ocean, sort of animals live without any invertebrates and have a soft body; the names are a giant squid. He assumes the sound belongs to this animal, because of their body, they are not detectable. However, the professor maintains an opposite opinion that although this gigantic animal is a better candidate than whales, it is not a great idea; the sounds belong to them because they are alive until now, but the sound merely was been detected for two decades.
Third, the reading mention that maybe this sound is for the strange submarine of a foreign country and cannot register to sonar, so submarine was not detectable. The professor, on the other hand, cast doubt on this claim by stating that if the submarine is from a secret country, they should move fast and further away from Russian submarine and the sound hardly hear. Moreover, scientists cannot build the submarine, which drives fast and is silent and cannot detectable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...solid moving of submarine in the ocean. The professor, however, refutes all of thos...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...e alive until now, but the sound merely was been detected for two decades. Third, the r...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, kind of, sort of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00336700337 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52723603358 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6480032987 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06452816374 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236952987822 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976371596786 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944427678457 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151611898477 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06292761785 0.0443174109184 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.