a strange sound heard by submarines and theories about that
Actually, both the passage and lecture discuss about a load strange sound heard by sailors in the North Atlantics and Arctic ocean. Because of a n approximate similarity to frog croaks , they called it ''quackers '', Although the source of sound moved quickly, the submarines ' sonar seemingly couldn't find any visible objects under water. Some hypothesizes have been suggested by them including Ocra whales sound, giant squids and military technology. The passage illustrates three claim expressing the probable reasons of noises; however, the lecturer rejects all theories by some logical reasons.
First, the passage claims female Ocra whales make such a sound to appear males’ attention; therefore, it might be Ocras ' sound. Although researches have acknowledge the similarity of Ocras ' noise and theodd sound, this theory isn't reinforced by lecturer. As she mentioned whales are living near surface of oceans; however, the sound is heard from deep part of seas.
Next, as the passage mentioned a special marine creature which its body is so soft that can't be detected by sonars; however, giant squids are clever enough that it is possible to make such a sound to defend themselves. Albeit the lecturer believes this hypothesis is better candidate , considering the fact that curious sounds have been disappear after two decades she doesn't validate that.
Finally, the passage claims the sound can be counted as a military technology sound that is produced by other countries facilities, on the other hand, the lecturer disagrees with the proposed idea because she thinks military objects can't move that quickly under water; moreover, engines of them absolutely products a hearable noise that sonar can detect them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.61111111111 5.08290768461 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.58019683196 2.5805825403 216% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.540411800872 123% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.55342163355 122% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7529790322 49.2860985944 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.7 110.228320801 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266184079746 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988073559591 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669877373814 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146204513738 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891780617877 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.3589403974 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 53.8541721854 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.35 12.2367328918 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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