summarise the points made in the lecture,being sure to explain how they cast doubts on specific points made in the reading passage.
according to the reading passage,three doubts were stated in the reading due to prove that memoir from chevalier is inaccurate and distorted,while in the listening passage lecturer mentioned three reasons that contradicts to the passage's arguments.
in the reading section,three doubts were pointed out in order to invalidate the memoir related to chevalier de seingalt.first,in his memoir the chevalier claims that he borrowed considerable sum of money from swiss merchant,while he was known as a wealthy person.second,critics were also skeptical about authenticity of conversation between chevalier and voltaire,which was written by some witnesses.third,critics have also questioned whether chevalier escaped from prison or bribe jailers for free.
while in the lecture,speaker was arguing that it can be possible that one memoir be inaccurate,but it does not indicate that it is unreliable.besides,he mentioned three ideas in order to contradicts to passage's arguements.first,according to loan from merchant,it was obvious that the chevalier was wealthy,but he usually borrowed money when he ran out of cash,which does not show that he was poor.second,according to conversation between chevalier and voltaire,although it is not possible to record every detail completely during conversation between them,but some witnesses claimed that they wrote most of the informations that they knew.third,according to escape from prison,other prisoners had more powerful friends than chevalier in order to bribe jailers,also the ceiling of the prison was repaired after he escaped,which indicates that he escaped from prison.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 75
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- TPO 38 integrated writing skill 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97844827586 5.08290768461 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.25514438249 2.5805825403 165% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547413793103 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 21.2450331126 362% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.724259778 49.2860985944 515% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.333333333 110.228320801 419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.3333333333 21.698381199 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06452816374 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087484618396 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799118354353 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046817669065 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799118354353 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046817669065 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.4 13.3589403974 340% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 53.8541721854 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 5.55761589404 347% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.0289183223 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.59 12.2367328918 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.42419426049 139% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.498013245 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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