summarize the points made in the lecture about Edmontosaurs migration, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the passage about possible reasons for Edmontosaurs migration.
The reading discusses Edmontosaurs a North Slope species of dinosaurs migration possibility and gives reasons to illustrate it. However, The professor in the lecture opposes this belief and refutes this idea by giving three reasons to support her position about their migration.
First, the article mentions the diet of these animals which was based on plants and it considers that due to plants' abundance decrease in winter they should have migrated in this season. But, professor indicates that the climate in that period was better than what is now in North Slope area. She reminds that in that time the weather was warmer so plants can easily grow in summer time which would be death in winter season and animals like Edmontosaurs can eat them to stay alive in cold winter periods.
Second, the passage talks about the skeletons and fossil remaining, found in the region where they were all generally discovered in an accumulated spot. In contrast, she believes that finding animals fossils in one specific place does not imply that they migrated completely to that area. She suggests that there are some other probable explainations for this incident. For example, they may live near each other in herds for protection reasons from outside predators that can significantly harm them. Also, she mentions the example of Elks, a group of animals who lived all in a herd but never migrated some place else.
Third, the reading discusses the physical ability of these animals which can assisted them to migrate to far places easier. On the other hand, professor does not accept this idea, since she thinks that there were some young generation lived in their herd too. So, they have not the ability needed for a long distance migration. In addition, these young animals cannot survive on their own so they should live near other mature adults for their safety.
- summarize the points made in the lecture about the origin of sounds heard in north Atlantic ocean, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the hypothesis made in the reading about it. 80
- summarize the points made in the lecture about Edmontosaurs migration, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the passage about possible reasons for Edmontosaurs migration. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- How do movies or TV influence people s behavior Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer 95
- People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...was warmer so plants can easily grow in summer time which would be death in winter season a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 311.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03215434084 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37605567143 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9551875284 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149852084239 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541339646645 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468076297802 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956407373089 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515734448507 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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