Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.
The reading and lecture are both about the driverless car which can be operated using sensor or computer.The author of the reading states,driverless cars are more efficient than that of the cars which require human.The lecturer disagrees.He mentions although it can be used without humans, it is not that reliable and attacks each of the claim made in the article.
The author of the writing begins by stating that driverless cars make less error than human.So, it is more safer to use for all. The lecturer points out there are flaws in the author’s position.Although,these cars don’t need human to operate these are actually made by human. In this regad, it doesnot make any sense to state that driverless cars make no mistakes at all.
According to the writer,driverless cars are better for environment.It makes less pollution.The speaker on other hand rebuts the argument.He mentions,once driverless cars are made available,more people will start to use.Thus,it will affect the environment.
Also, the reading passage says using driverless cars people will have more time as they need not to focus on driving.This will saves time for them to do whaterever activity they would like to do.The speaker states people find driving more relaxing.Thus although it saves people’s time,it might be the another way to work.Having spare time allow them to do work while driving as well.
To sump up,both the reading and lecture are both about the driving cars.The lecturer effectively challenges the points made in the article.
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 86
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 68
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 81
- Now summarize condense the points made in the lecture compose your response and clarify how they provide a reason to feel ambiguous about the points made in the perusing passage 85
- In order to be well informed a person must get information from many different news sources Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an be operated using sensor or computer.The author of the reading states,driverless...
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...omputer.The author of the reading states,driverless cars are more efficient than that of th...
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...an that of the cars which require human.The lecturer disagrees.He mentions although...
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...an that of the cars which require human.The lecturer disagrees.He mentions although...
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...ch require human.The lecturer disagrees.He mentions although it can be used withou...
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...verless cars make less error than human.So, it is more safer to use for all. The l...
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...here are flaws in the author’s position.Although,these cars don’t need human to operate ...
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...here are flaws in the author’s position.Although,these cars don’t need human to operate ...
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...istakes at all. According to the writer,driverless cars are better for environment.It make...
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...for environment.It makes less pollution.The speaker on other hand rebuts the argume...
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...available,more people will start to use.Thus,it will affect the environment. Also, ...
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...me as they need not to focus on driving.This will saves time for them to do whaterev...
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... need not to focus on driving.This will saves time for them to do whaterever activity...
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...ime,it might be the another way to work.Having spare time allow them to do work while ...
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...lecture are both about the driving cars.The lecturer effectively challenges the poi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24796747967 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12478963533 2.5805825403 121% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.969940234 49.2860985944 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.428571429 110.228320801 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 21.698381199 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 4.19205298013 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16296840656 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867985800936 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788888926843 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105924456001 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668903522722 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.3589403974 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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