Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage.
Both the reading and the listening discuss city development land. The article states that it will benefit the small city. However, the lecture opposes specific points made in the reading passage. The professor says that he is part of the member of the council and he is protesting against the propose.
The first point the professor makes is that the land will destroy the view of the city. He elaborates that it should be converted in a plan to do another thing. As an example he says that it should be converted ia a park to preserve the nature in order to attract more people. This point opposes the point made in the reading passage. The latter states that the residential area nearby will obrigate people around and enhance the view of the area.
Furthermore, the professor points out that goods will cost much more. he explains that it is very unfair and crazy because not everybody will be able to end one's meet. Developers only want to make money but do not care for others. This opposes the information made from the reading. According to the passage the building development will solve everybodies' drawbacks.
Finally, the lecture states that the city needs more green space not less. This point opposes the reading's key point. According to the article the project will attract more profits to the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he council and he is protesting against the propose. The first point the professor makes i...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onverted in a plan to do another thing. As an example he says that it should be co...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...nts out that goods will cost much more. he explains that it is very unfair and cra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37193939451 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6479805392 49.2860985944 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0588235294 110.228320801 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288916508686 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112276727841 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172067992678 0.0662205650399 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185898185407 0.162205337803 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428892617246 0.0443174109184 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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