TOEFL integrated writing: Dutch painter Rembrandt

The reading and listening materials are talking about a painting that might or might not be painted by Rembrand. The article states that there are some issues that could suggest that involved painting does not belong to Rembrand. However, the professor explains that the painting was studied using Xray technology and the researchers reached the conclusion that in fact the painting is Rembrand.

First, the article states that the picture contains some inconsistencies related to the women’s dress’ style. More specifically, the fur collar that women wears does not match with ...

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No. of Different Words: 135 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.974 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.409 2.4
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Avg. Sentence Length: 22.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.836 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
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