Do you agree or desagree: "A university education should always include an internship or some type of work experience"
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Is very well known that in today’s society, on the job market, the demand for good jobs is greater than the offer. Many graduated people are struggling to find jobs and one of the main reason is the lack of work experience which is often required by the hiring companies. Generally speaking, I think is better for all concerned, if the university education will always include an internship or some type of work experience.
First of all, if the students have the chance to explore the work world in their areas will help them to understand better the theory presented in classes. For example, ...
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