Torreya tree
The reading and the lecture are both about Torreya taxifolia which is a type of tree in Florida becoming extinct. The author of the article presents three solutions to prevent the decline of Torreya. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. Her position is that none of three solutions will satisfactorily solve the problem of extinction of Torreya.
According to the reading, the first way to save Torreya is reestablishing it in the same location -Northern Florida which have a specific microclimate. The article mentions that the microclimate is wet and cool, and it is completely suitable for Torreya’s development. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that Global warming has negatively affected on the climate of Florida. Additionally, she points out that climate will become drier in the whole area of Florida.
Secondly, the author suggests that moving Torreya to different locations is also an effective way because Torreya could be easily migrated by human to another environment suited for its survival. In the articles, it is said that Torreya seeds will be able to grow in forests further north which have a cooler temperature than Florida. The professor, however, asserts that moving Torreya to another area will cause some consequences on other species of plant. She also makes it clear by giving an example about the black locust tree which had been already moved to another place. As a result, the black locust tree spread dramatically and made other plants and trees living there become endangered species.
Finally, the author posits that bringing Torreya to research center not only preserves Torreya but also brings some benefits to scientists. The author contends that it will be more convenient for researchers both to protect the species and do research on Torreya. In contrast, the lecturer’s stance is that large population and genetic diversity in Torreya’s community are the key factors for it to resist disease. She also notes that research center could not have enough capacities to satisfy the large population of Torreya so that this solution will not be realistic in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 350.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19142857143 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75424570214 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6310011727 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387092987003 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112893935977 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07900175405 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231986850277 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847333613947 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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