The reading and the lecture both about employees typically work five days a week or four days a week in the united states because many employees want to work a four-day and willing to accept less pay in order to do so. The author of the reading believes that if employees work a four-day week it increase company profit. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article.
First of all, the author points out that four-day week increase company profit. It is mentioned that employees work four day week they have chance to get rested and alert and make less error which expand company growth. This point is challenged by lecture. He says that if employees work four-day a week then company require new worker and required more space and more computer which decrease company profit. furthermore, new workers make large error that diminish company growth.
Secondly, the author contends that in four-day week employees work on 80% salary so company can hire new people which decrease unemployment rate. The lecture rebuts this argument. He suggests that if employees work a four-day week company expect same amount of work from employees what they did in a five-day a week so no new worker hires and do not decrease unemployment rate.
Finally, the author states that in a four-day week, employees have more personal time to spend with family and friends. The article establish that employ feel less stress and work more efficiently. The lecture, on the other hand, mention that if the quality of work is reduce then they have less chance to grow in carrier and less chance to get promotion. He puts the idea that if there is any big error than they have chance to loss job.
- TOEFL integrated writing The sea otter 87
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- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 60
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...at if employees work a four-day week it increase company profit. The lecture casts doubt...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur-day week it increase company profit. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... mentioned that employees work four day week they have chance to get rested and aler...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...computer which decrease company profit. furthermore, new workers make large error that dimi...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t in four-day week employees work on 80% salary so company can hire new people wh...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'establishes'.
Suggestion: establishes
...nd with family and friends. The article establish that employ feel less stress and work m...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... mention that if the quality of work is reduce then they have less chance to grow in c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.795221843 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32522669201 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467576791809 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.081995361 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413085808717 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160680125757 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12749886102 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293887442203 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736022912028 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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