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A conterverioal disscussion begins at the task. As mentioned in the listening section, the company prefers to hire the employees which work for five days a week. Although, the empolyees who want to work less, they may loss their job during promotion.
On the other hand, it costs the same health insurance for the company, and employees can have more spare time. However, hiring more employees need tremendous amount of budgets.
But with the factor i read from writing section, they believe on less work days, can improve the quality of the work, and less error will appear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich work for five days a week. Although, the empolyees who want to work less, the...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...unt of budgets. But with the factor i read from writing section, they believe...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk, and less error will appear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.4613686534 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 30.3222958057 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 492.0 1373.03311258 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 98.0 270.72406181 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.14634628365 4.04702891845 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47023092368 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 145.348785872 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.744897959184 0.540411800872 138% => OK
syllable_count: 137.7 419.366225166 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3749731875 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317545698726 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138346736559 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876584341852 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191420189861 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693461153629 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 63.6247240618 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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