The article suggests that a four-day workweek with less payment would be beneficial for the whole economy as well as the individual company and the employee who decided to take the option, and he provides three points of support. However, the professor disagrees with the author's points, and he refutes each of the author's points.
First,The passage states that four days workweek would increase the company profit since the employee will have more time to relax and rest. As a result, they will be less likely to do costly error. On the other hand, the professor opposes this idea by explaining that four days workweek will force the company to spend more money on providing training as well as health insurance for the new hiring. In addition to that, the company should provide more office space and computer desk.
Secondly, the reading claims that the new plan will enhance the whole economy since it would decrease the unemployment rate. If the full-time employees work less hours, they will shift some of their workload to a new employee. However, the professor refutes this point by pointing to the fact that no additional job will be created since the hiring cost is very high. Moreover, the company will raise the expectation that the a four-day employee will do the same a mount of work that they used to do it in a five-day workweek. As a consequence, no additional jobs will be created plus the current jobs will be unpleasant.
Finally, the author claims that the new plan will be in favor of the employee who opt for the four days workweek because it will increase the quality of their life. They will have more time to indulge in family events or pursuing special goals. In the contarary, the lecture contradicts this idea by explaining that the four days workweek will presents some risks since in the economic downturn the four days employee tend to lose their job and they will pass over promotions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article suggests that a four-day wor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ual company and the employee who decided to take the option, and he provides thre...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
... each of the authors points. First,The passage states that four days workweek ...
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Line 4, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o spend more money on providing training as well as health insurance for the new ...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...t rate. If the full-time employees work less hours, they will shift some of their workload...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t rate. If the full-time employees work less hours, they will shift some of their wo...
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Line 6, column 423, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...company will raise the expectation that the a four-day employee will do the same a mo...
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...e current jobs will be unpleasant. Finally, the author claims that the new ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
...aining that the four days workweek will presents some risks since in the economic downtu...
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...ob and they will pass over promotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82530120482 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40143180787 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472891566265 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5457081113 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460146374078 0.272083759551 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169905244575 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114455122877 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302117357777 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161736650524 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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