The reading and the lecture are about some employee chose to work for four days instead of the typical five days and accept to pay low as result of it. The author of the reading believes that employee in united states work for five days , some of them willingly work for four days and accept less payment. The lecture casts doubts on the claims made in the article. He thinks that working for four days has no advantage economically or on individual lives.
First of all, the author points out that working for fours days will increase the companies profits .It is mentioned that employee will feel more rested and alert and that will make less costly error .This point is challenged by the lecture .He says working four days will cause to spend more money .Farthermore , He argues new workers will be needed in order to spend mont in training and medical benefits also those new workers will need more office space and computers . All that will be cut from the company budget.
Secondly, the author contends that hair more employee to ensure same amount of work will be done and no additional pay.The article notes four days working employee will be pain eighty percent of the rate. The lecture rebuts this argument.He suggests hiring new employee is costly .He elaborates on this by mentioning that companies will ask employee to work over time or expect form the four days work employee to do the job of five days work with no additional pay.
Finally , the author states that for individual to offer low payment in order to get free time will increase their quality of life.The article establishes that employee will spend more time with their families enjoying their interest and activities .The lecture , on the other hand,points that free time for employee is risky .He puts forth the idea that will decrease employee job stability and their appoutrinities to advanced their career . The four days week workers tend to be the first ones to lose there job and passed over the promotion for manger and supervisor that will be qualified for the five days worker for consistency of work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79005524862 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31656931339 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472375690608 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.828264209 49.2860985944 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.4 110.228320801 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2 21.698381199 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 4.19205298013 763% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463864769572 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220184968837 0.0996497079465 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100703884609 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324720372978 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590516025864 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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