The reading and the lecture are about the best way to accomplish certine new projects .The author of the reading believes that making a team is the best way to approach a project . The lecture caste doubts on the claims made in the article. He thinks that some times working in a group is not faire to members and not target is done.
First of all, the author points out that a big team will include wide rang of knowledge , experts and skills . It is mentioned that will help to work quickly and find a solution for every problem or issue .This point is challenged by the lecture. He says working in team is not quickly .Furthermore,he argues leak of concinsy . Many decions and problems need more meeting and time to be solve .
Secondly, the author contends that spreading responsibilities for decisions.The articles notes no one will held responsibility if the decision is wrong . The lecture rebuts this argument.He suggestes working as a group is like a free ride for some members. He elaborates this by mentioning that some members are influencer and their decision will be agreed on , in case the project failed its on the whole group.Some members there decision or point of view being ignored again if failed the whole team take the responsibility .
Finally,the author states that working in a team is very rewarding for members.The article establishes that feel better about carrying out the work that entitled to and better chance to shine by getting their contribution not just organized but also impact in a significant way that is greater that working a lone .The lecture, on the other hand, points that members who did well don't get a reward for that.He puts forth the idea that members who provied solutions for problems and issue are not recognized because the whole team take the credit and that oppose to what the reading cited.
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- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, first of all, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81761006289 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66013713124 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.092731818 49.2860985944 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.272727273 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 4.19205298013 811% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384653661082 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125603156861 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629227983267 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220802786713 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456155155535 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.