TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa

The reading explains that dinosaurs were endotherms and provides three reasons of support. The professor, however, explains that scientist have problem with the reasons that prove dinosaurs were endotherms and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that dinosaur fossils in polar regions show they were Endotherms. The professor refutes this point by saying that location of their fossil could not prove this claim. She mentions that although it is true that some fossils of dinosaurs are in polar regions, they could migrate to warmer regions. Besides, the professor says that dinosaurs might hibernate.
Second, the article states that dinosaur's leg position and their runing is a evidence for the idea of being endotherm. The professor definitely rebuts this point by saying that runnig needs a lot of energy. She says that dinosaurs were so larg and they had a larg wieght which did not let them to run. As another note, the lecturer mentions the point that position of legs' other animals are the same too but they are not Endotherms.
Finally, the reading states that dinosaur had Harversuan canals which allow them to grow quickly as the same as Endothermy. The professor contradict this idea by saying that their growing was not enought. She mentions that it is true that dinosaurs have haversian canals but they growing was not as much enough as the endotherms. Besides, she mentions the point that endotherms grew so rapidly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...osaurs leg position and their runing is a evidence for the idea of being endother...
^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'contradicts'.
Suggestion: contradicts
...s the same as Endothermy. The professor contradict this idea by saying that their growing ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, second, so, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10460251046 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44221034715 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481171548117 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8682888369 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333603856423 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125536777054 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703001170972 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216526268174 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200464517912 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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