The article discusses about endotherms that can keep their temperature to constant such as birds and mammals. However, human endotherm can also maintain their temperature at 37 degrees. Thus, dinosaurs show a strong evidence that they can be consider as endotherm regardless of the temperature either warm or cold. The professor, however, aren't convincing and refutes the author's reason below.
First, The author claims that fossils were found on polar region that can only maintain a certain temperature above of the surrounding that couldn't be active in cold temperature. The professor refutes the author's reason, he states that polar dinosaurs can migrate to a warmer temperature or can hibernate. The professor concludes that it doesn't have clear evidence on the dinosaur living in a colder region.
Second, the author suggests that there is a connection on the leg position and endotherm that can possible sustain physical activity such running that shows very efficient to the animals with the legs position underneath the body, on the contrary, the professor refutes the reason of the author. He states that It doesn't show any proof that animals can running with their legs underneath the body, henceforth the professor explains that when the leg is underneath the body the dinosaur will grow larger and wider that makes the dinosaur move slowly and unable to run.
Third, the author states that there is a connector called haversian canal in which it connects the structure to the blood vessels in that way the animals will grow quickly and rapidly, on the other hand, the professor opposes the author's reason .He states that the dinosaurs can grow in another canal called growth ring, in which, the animals will grow slowly during cold temperature that contradict the author's reason. The professor, was completely opposing on the author's reason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, second, so, third, thus, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55625376935 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.48064153 49.2860985944 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349850358721 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141541202505 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684340375128 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222068193539 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492664490842 0.0443174109184 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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