The reading and the lecture both discuss about Chevalier’s memoir. While the reading passage states that the events in the memoir are exagerated, the lecture casts doubt this point by saying that this document is indeed accurate.
First of all, The reading passage claims that Chevalier was not as rich as he mentioned in his memoir since he usually borrowed money for other people. The professor counters this idea by saying that after he spent his money in parties and gambling , he runned out of money , so he often took money for merchants just until he recovered his cash.
Secondly, The reading passages posits that the conversation written in the chevalier’memoir was imposible to reproduce since they were held many years before. The lecture oposses to this idea by explaining that Chevalier used to take note after a conversation with voltaire, as a result, he has this help to remember the phrases and main points of conversations with people.
Finally, The reading passage says that the escape of Chevalier was a fake and that he used his influences to get out of prison. However, the professor explains that there is evidence that there were more influencial people in that prison that could not be free. Moreover, He mentions that there is a document of the case that says that the prison of Chevalier was forced, therefore, the seal needed to be fixed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spent his money in parties and gambling , he runned out of money , so he often to...
^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es and gambling , he runned out of money , so he often took money for merchants ju...
^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... remember the phrases and main points of conversations with people. Finally, T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97413793103 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77053625448 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9266483353 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.222222222 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06452816374 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388203565247 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174894005191 0.0996497079465 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721017748675 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234018611425 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511894470733 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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