The reading and the lecture are both about hydrogen, which is a kind of fuel can use as the energy for cars. The author of the reading believes that there are a lot of advantages of using hydrogen. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks hydrogen is not a solution to replace gas, which we use to engine the cars today.
First of all, the author of the reading points out that the resource to produce hydrogen is easy and available, because even people can use water and natural gas to make the hydrogen. This point is challenged by the lecture. He says that making hydrogen is not easy as the reading has mentioned. People cannot use water directly, but they have to obtain pure liquid, this requires very cold temperature. Therefore, it demand of lot of work.
Secondly, the author of the reading contends that using hydrogen is not harmful to the environment. The lecture rebuts this argument that even though hydrogen does not affect negatively to the environment, the process to make hydrogen generates pollution very much. He says that to produce hydrogen, people have to burn oil and coal. Therefore, the factories, which make hydrogen cause of tremendous pollution to the environment.
Finally, the author of the reading states that the cost of using hydrogen is cheaper twice than internal-combustion engines. The lecture on the other hand, opposes this idea. He refutes that the price of making and using the hydrogen is more expensive, because it is manufactured from platinum, which is rare and expensive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a lot of advantages of using hydrogen. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'demands'?
Suggestion: demands
...es very cold temperature. Therefore, it demand of lot of work. Secondly, the author o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67418877103 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.895703837 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219065087922 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733825858454 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525071414883 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141878635884 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354504867781 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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