The speaker disagrees about the statement that it is troubling that people nowadays especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to.
First, though nowadays people read less literature, novels, plays, and poems, there are some other books which are of high value, such as historical materials, science, and political generals. These books can also stimulate people's intellectual imagination.
Second, besides written materials, there are also some other unwritten literature forms of culture. For example, a good movie, a brilliant song, these unwritten forms of culture also bring people intellects.
In addition, although nowadays there is less support for literature, it is not all readers' faults, because some books nowadays are very difficult to understand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , novels
...g people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , than
...less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. First, though nowadays...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 30.3222958057 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 1373.03311258 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 270.72406181 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85833333333 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 4.04702891845 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9097417793 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 145.348785872 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.540411800872 126% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 419.366225166 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0723438502 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287926459535 0.272083759551 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133143382744 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538008734412 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166307316444 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485223364733 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.0289183223 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.2367328918 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 63.6247240618 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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