The reading passage and the lecture illustrates a fascinating topic pertaining to Jane Austen, who is one of the most famous of all English novelists, and today her novels are more popular than ever, with several recently adapted as Hollywood movies.The reading passage posits that the full-length portrait of a teenage girl owned by a member of the Austen family is of Jane Austen and provides reasons for the same. However, the lecturer refutes each of the authors claims and provides evidences for the same.
The reading passage puts forth the idea that family members have recognised it as the potrait of Jane Austen. However, the lecturer refutes the claim by saying that the publications happened in 1882 and Jane Austen has died 70 years by then. Her family family wouldn't know her well because of the large year gap. The claim in the reading passage is unsubstantiated.
Second, the reading passage states that the Cassandra's sketch is almost similar to that the teenage Jane Austen because the eye brows, nose, mouth and overall shape are very much same as the full-length portrait. Nevertheless, the lecturer opposes this claim by saying that the portrait can be of a relative of Austin. He supports his claim by saying that Jane Austin has an extended family and the painting may be of one of her cousins. Also many experts believed that the painting resembled their distant niece. Clearly, a disparity exists between the author's claims and the evidence exhibited by the lecturer.
In addition, the reading passage claims that although the painting was unsigned and undated, there is evidence that painting was done when she was a teenager. The style links to Ozias Humphrey, a society portrait painter who was the kind of professional the wealthy Austen family would hire. Nonetheless, the lecturer rebutes the claim by saying that the stamp on the cloth which William sold was not in that age. He didn't sell canvas when she was small. Austin was old when he sold it.
In this way, the reading passage and the lecturer provides important information about the potrait. There is a lack of evidence to support the claims in the reading passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d by a member of the Austen family is of Jane Austen and provides reasons for the...
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...embers have recognised it as the potrait of Jane Austen. However, the lecturer re...
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...hat the teenage Jane Austen because the eye brows, nose, mouth and overall shape are very...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in addition', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299748110831 0.261695866417 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.143576826196 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0629722921914 0.0723426182421 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0277078085642 0.0435111971325 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0327455919395 0.0277247811725 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123425692695 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0302267002519 0.0370669169778 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50932778626 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0100755667506 0.0208969081088 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.146095717884 0.128158765124 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00755667506297 0.0158828679856 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201511335013 0.0114777025283 176% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2157.0 1645.83664459 131% => OK
No of words: 364.0 271.125827815 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92582417582 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04852973271 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384615384615 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293956043956 0.287516216867 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162087912088 0.187439937562 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.113142543107 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50932778626 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491758241758 0.539623497131 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.8896234458 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0529801325 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2222222222 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6394378003 49.3711431718 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 132.220823453 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.878197800319 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.39072847682 265% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.6178266178 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.22222222222 1.90840788429 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.786915619033 0.549887131256 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145460309894 0.142949733639 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102233651547 0.0787303798458 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623906889711 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161054677436 0.139662658121 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.366388156487 0.266732575781 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163985732516 0.103435571967 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.526915033893 0.414875509568 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0860385581233 0.0530846634433 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.599257698894 0.40443939384 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076537998396 0.0528353158467 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.26048565121 235% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.1766004415 252% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.2958057395 146% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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