TPO 15
The passage states that the cane toad which is a large amphibian species native to America multiplied rapidly in Australia and thus threaten small native animlas. The author provides three measures to stop spread of the cane toad in Australia. The lecturer, nevertheless, says that these methods are unsuccessful and disproves each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that to block the spread of the toad would be to build a national fence which prevent them from moving into different parts. Conversely, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that the spread of the toad will not stop. According to the professor, cand toad eggs and young toads are in streams that move from one side to another and thus it is essential to fence the streams.
In addition, the article posits that toads could be captured and destroyed by volunteers that organized by goverment. On the other hand, the lecturer argues that even though this method could be successful to stop the tond from spreading, but volunteers will destroy native frogs especially the young frogs.
Finally, the passage expresses that by developing a disease-causing virus, the cane toad populations will be controled. Quite on the contrary, the professor emphasizes that it has terrible result on cane tond habitats. Transporting of reptile and amphibian to other countries shows that this method causes ecological disaster because the cand toads are native and limited spieces.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p spread of the cane toad in Australia. The lecturer, nevertheless, says that these...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22553191489 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66460460487 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56170212766 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7749652495 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.535130776733 0.272083759551 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198386710284 0.0996497079465 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974544771219 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305180300137 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489134373533 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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