Britain has a long and rich history of settlement. Hence, Britain is one of the most valuable places for archaeologist to investigate and promote their research. The reading passage mentions some problems that archeologisit will face during their examinations in Britain. But the lecturer thinks that by new guidlines in 1990, all the problem has solved.
The reading passage mentions that by new construction projects in Britain, most of ancient valuable sites are in danger. Because many of archeological artifacts were destroyed by construction. But the lecturer mentioned the new guildline that insists on examination of any construction sites by archeologist before any construction.
The reading passage mentions that there is not adequate funding sources for archeologist to continue their investigation. Because goverment changed the priority of funding. But the lecturer thinks that archeological investigation will be paid by construction company which doesn't have any relationship with goverment funding.
Finally, the reading passage thinks that, there is not enough jobs for archeologist in universities or government agencies and many people prefer to study and work on other fields. But he lecturer thinks that by new guidlines, people will be paid for archeological investigation and this includes data analysis and publishing papers in different journlas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in 1990, all the problem has solved. The reading passage mentions that by new...
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Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f ancient valuable sites are in danger. Because many of archeological artifacts were de...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...archeologist before any construction. The reading passage mentions that there ...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...logist to continue their investigation. Because goverment changed the priority of fundi...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...l be paid by construction company which doesnt have any relationship with goverment fu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y relationship with goverment funding. Finally, the reading passage thinks that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 204.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74509803922 5.08290768461 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21874854192 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0393334338 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22123876783 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088001808116 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479843711714 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13749911072 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211571748903 0.0443174109184 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.2367328918 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.