tpo 17
In the past century, the steady growth of the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States—birds in particular. Unfortunately for birds, these trends are likely to continue, with the result that the number of birds in the United States will necessarily decline.
First, as human populations and settlements continue to expand, birds’ natural habitats will continue to disappear. Forests, wetlands, and grasslands will give way to ever more homes, malls, and offices. As the traditional areas suitable for birds keep decreasing, so will the size of the bird populations that depend on those vanishing habitats.
Second, agricultural activities must increase to keep pace with the growing human population. The growth of agriculture will also result in the further destruction of bird habitats as more and more wilderness areas are converted to agricultural use. As a result, bird populations in rural areas will continue to decline.
Third, as human settlements expand and agriculture increases, the use of chemical pesticides will also increase. Pesticides are poisons designed to kill agricultural and home garden pests, such as insects, but inevitably, pesticides get into the water and into the food chain for birds where they can harm birds. Birds that eat the poisoned insects or drink contaminated water can die as a result, and even if pesticides do not kill birds outright, they can prevent them from reproducing successfully. So pesticides have significantly contributed to declines in bird population, and because there will continue to be a need to control agricultural pests in the future, this decline will continue.
by growing of the human population and increase in urban life and urban area, there is not appropriate space for some animals and specially birds so birds can not live in that place and they will disappear from urban area and environment for the consequense. although some animals can continue to live in urban area. about second point, agriculture will not keep to increase because in some case area for agriculture become less and less as the result of increasing and growth of the human population. also we use less pesticide for crops and garden. as second solution for using chemical pestisides, humans use unpoisons pesticides so this pesticies will not enter in the water and the food chain so those are not harm for bird and will not cause decline in bird population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
by growing of the human population and inc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ea and environment for the consequense. although some animals can continue to live in ur...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ea and environment for the consequense. although some animals can continue to live in ur...
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Suggestion: About
...als can continue to live in urban area. about second point, agriculture will not keep...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: Also
...ing and growth of the human population. also we use less pesticide for crops and gar...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...ing and growth of the human population. also we use less pesticide for crops and gar...
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Suggestion: As
...se less pesticide for crops and garden. as second solution for using chemical pest...
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Line 1, column 777, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l not cause decline in bird population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 1373.03311258 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 270.72406181 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81343283582 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.04702891845 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53946353151 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 145.348785872 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 419.366225166 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3258941454 49.2860985944 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490527745946 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238449100575 0.0996497079465 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117449553819 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.490527745946 0.162205337803 302% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 63.6247240618 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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