TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi
The reading passage states that Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree, started to perish in the state of Florida. The passage provided three solutions to solve this matter. The professor, meanwhile, casts serious doubts on this claim and she believes that none of these strategies will have satisfactory results to address this issue.
First, the reading passage claims that one option could be reestablishing Torreya in the same area where it flourished for several years. On the other hand, the lecturer makes the argument that this solution cannot improve the problem. She comments that some factors such as global warming and wetland drainage have affected the area to become dryer than before. Thus, it is improbable to find the similar original microclimate of this kind.
Second, the article declares that other solution could be moving Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its unique microclimate, while the professor disagrees and brings an example of another species to clarify her reasoning. She mentions that once scientists wanted to help the black locus tree to thrive in another location but it had some unpredictable consequences. This tree spread quickly and killed other plants which were some endangered species.
Third, although the reading posits that the other way to rescue Torreya could be preserving it in research centers, the professor firmly refutes this claim and believes that it is not possible to keep and study Torreya in the research center. As a matter of fact, there is a need for relatively large space than the research center and also a significantly different number of the tree's population to succeed in surviving this tree.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d three solutions to solve this matter. The professor, meanwhile, casts serious dou...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...a significantly different number of the trees population to succeed in surviving this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, thus, while, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22426470588 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63282272755 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0776152854 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357400607725 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113053392317 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859527237704 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204890373993 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306065993456 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.